So, lately I've been wondering alot about how I can improve, my wanna-be-poetry... How I can make it more interesting. And that was actually the reason, I started uploading it here, not that I expected to instantly get a million comments, but I just seem to get little to no feedback.
Since I want to get better, I will be in need of people willing to give their honest opinions, and say what they think I could do better...
I mean it's okay, to just leave a comment saying that you liked this text, but I just really can't draw anything from it: For all I know, you just like the piece in general.
I don't ask you to post a comment on every singl